Talk:Sportsmanship
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This page copied directly from "Belegarth: Medieval Combat Society - A Complete Guide to the Sport" by Xipher --[[User:Eeach|Eeach]] 11:45, 9 January 2009 (EST) | This page copied directly from "Belegarth: Medieval Combat Society - A Complete Guide to the Sport" by Xipher --[[User:Eeach|Eeach]] 11:45, 9 January 2009 (EST) | ||
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A much shorter version could be put in place of this. this is really wordy and redundant in places. i think a bullet point list of situations and how to handle them would be more beneficial than a wall of text- Cyric | A much shorter version could be put in place of this. this is really wordy and redundant in places. i think a bullet point list of situations and how to handle them would be more beneficial than a wall of text- Cyric | ||
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| + | I don't see the redundancies you speak of. It may seem a bit wordy because it's part of a book (directed at new members) and intended to be printed that way. I'll see if i can figure out how to make a category to contain [[New Realm Starter Kit|my project]] so that it isn't so confusing. --[[User:Eeach|Eeach]] 13:23, 9 January 2009 (EST) | ||
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Credits
This page copied directly from "Belegarth: Medieval Combat Society - A Complete Guide to the Sport" by Xipher --Eeach 11:45, 9 January 2009 (EST)
Too Wordy
A much shorter version could be put in place of this. this is really wordy and redundant in places. i think a bullet point list of situations and how to handle them would be more beneficial than a wall of text- Cyric
I don't see the redundancies you speak of. It may seem a bit wordy because it's part of a book (directed at new members) and intended to be printed that way. I'll see if i can figure out how to make a category to contain my project so that it isn't so confusing. --Eeach 13:23, 9 January 2009 (EST)
